Keflex for bv

BV- I loved it!! Maybe I'll have to start talking to my wife about training me -- the same way!!! More please!!!

One of the girls went back to rubbing herself after having a finger or more in a man’s probably-unwashed and unsterilised hole? Nothing sexy about BV

Most of the best parts were details that many writers ignore-- I think they make the players into individuals that I want to meet or mess with, like Nikki. or BV herself.

Thank You for completing the whole story! It was Excellently written with Erotic Drama with Intrigue to keep us wanting to know more. Yes, when you reread it the clue are there. Thank You for allowing me to act as an editor and to share my feedback as you prepared to re-release the story abb BV d the next 2 parts. I too was caught off guard by the twist ending by the girls. Best wishes on future stories.

I do not think Federation will turn into anything more democratic soon. Except for Helene and maybe Jenna, all girls and John are all vigilantes. They take action when needed and play the judge, jury and executioner. There is only two Terran villians left alive at the moment and I do not think the crew of Invictus will wait for an indipendent court to decide for their guilt and punishment.
If John losses his power stemming from admirality, he will not be able to legally and morally claim he is doing the right thing.
If the federation turns into a true democracy what will happen to war effort? Lynette can turn things around quite sucessfully since she does not have to lobby for the changes she plans to make. I do not think any US senate will approve any request to absolve DARPHA. Another problem with an actual democracy can be the newly acquired Kintark worlds will rebel against Terran federation.
Trankarans were a kind of democracy at the beginning and the story arc concluded that this made them vulnarable in the conflict. When Nisekkara grab the power by becoming the Glowing Queen, the senate has no other choice than obeying her.
As Romans showed us in times of conflict it is better to have a Sezar at the helm.
So I believe this problem will be addressed after the progenitor war.
Maybe an existing villian can either confront the governers of the colonies or rise to power by manupulating them as their elected representative we will wait and see...
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Great chapter... Thank you Tefler.
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I think Tefler's writing is getting much better. Loved the build up to Daphne it was so emotional and well constructed.
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Thanks for sharing other stories like Eight Warden. I want to recommend Undying Mercinary series by BV Larson...
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Wish you all well and healthy days...
Notatincan

for her and for him. good for drama but for the soul.

For the new submission. Waiting for more. Any word on the follow up for Emperor for the Eclipse?