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Sometimes people don’t know they’re pregnant until the baby comes. If Steve gained weight suddenly in the stomach it would look like a beer belly. Hangovers and morning sickness are similar.
You could write short stories professionally for collections edited by Rachel Kramer Bussell, Allison Tyler or Violet Blue. You might even get a story published in Fishnet at the Blowfish blog.
Well done, and a pleasure to read.
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Enough to spoil his lovely daughter and wife.
It was like investing in fine wine instead of renting cases of beer, bar stools, hangovers and motels. No divorce or BTB vengeance. Classic.
You mentionned that could mention might help you write more comfortably, so I volunteer . . .
Yeah hangovers - Yea, hangovers . Punctuation might improve a story, or kill it.
I don't what to do - know why I picked this out ?
Her meaty trunk for a cock - of a cock
Chock/choke
Despite the little words - few words
These are but a few examples have pulled from the first half of your tale. Suggestions for a more easily read piece, perhaps a more efficiently written piece.
Of utmost importance is Proof Reading. I have seen a suggestion, made by a commentor, to record yourself reading/Proof Reading your piece THEN listen to your recording while reading along. I think this is a very good suggestion, so I offer it to you. Not my original idea, but worthy of application.
You display tremendous potential, not only for this genre, but for more within literotica.com
I hope to read more offerings from you, with submissions come growth.